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Fleeting Dreams of Memories by ~Samara-make-a-scene:iconSamara-make-a-scene:



I lived in a boring town where there was nothing to do. My mom never let me do anything! Not even go to my friends houses! I hated that! But one day ,my mom told me that she had to go on a business trip and, she couldn’t take me with her because of expenses .So surprising she left the whole house to me!
       It wasn’t as fun as I thought it would be though, because practically all of my friends were at Summer Camp but I didn’t get to go!
   One day all of a sudden, after a day had passed without my parents, a 'U-HAUL'
Truck towed into the next-door drive way. Since my parents weren’t here to disapprove I was free to rome freely, so I went to  greet the neighbors, but to my surprise a guy, about my age, holding his skateboard in his left hand and brushing his long hair out of his face. He was wearing a Hurley shirt, and a striped black beanie on his head, with his long black bangs hanging, covering his left eye.
   I rushed over to greet him.
   “Hi.”
   “ ‘Sup.”
   “What’s your name?”
   “Kurotana.”
   “Cool, my names Liina.”
   “Cool.”
   We talked for a while after that, and then I went back home. The next day we both had nothing to do, so we hung out a while .I noticed he was really good with a skateboard. I told him “I’m so jealous”
   “Then I’ll teach you.”
   “Really?!”
   “Tomorrow at 9:00 meet me here.”
      Later, we started meeting at the skate park, at 9:00 AM, every day. That was the funnest time of my life! I got better and better as the days went by, and by about 2 weeks I could do a 50/50, nose grind, and even a Smith Grind! I was so proud of myself!
   I thought it would never end. But, just like the 'U-HAUL' truck, it came to our town as quickly as it left. After a month, he told me had to leave, he said that his dad moved often. They were the saddest words I ever heard. I couldn’t control it, and I started to cry I realized at that moment that I really loved him. I was heart broken, but he gave me his skateboard. He said he signed it, so that when he went pro I would have his signature .Before he left, he told me he loved me too, but that just made me miss him more..
   After he left I became deeply depressed. I lost all track of time, it was as if I was in a trance. The only thing I had was my memory of him. But even that was soon
Lost, I wasn’t sure if he was real or someone I made up. I wasn’t sure of anything anymore, it was as if it was all a dream. No one was around to see him, not even my mom. Soon he was a lost memory, after a year I completely forgot him.
   Even the skateboard he gave me. I didn’t understand when or where I got it. All it said was “Never forget me, with ♥ anatoru K.”, it was all so confusing… It was a
Memory I would never get back. But I always felt like there was a part of me missing…
©2007-2009 ~Samara-make-a-scene
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"Pursue the memories that penetrate into your heart
onward toward these stories that continue on forever
Believe that we shall meet again, once more.
Yes. It is certain
some day...Once more..."
-XxX Holic

[this sounds crappy i have to write this in a hurry,i will change.]

This had to be like REALLY short,
cause i had to do it for school,
it could only be 2 short pages.. TTwTT
So yeah.

This needs Alott of work..
i will work on it.. -__-

I wrote this about a year ago <3
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Nahh, it dun sound creepy-er! Crappy. Eh, heh, heh... ^^;

Keep going at it. First comment! W00t!

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Rorrawr! Jasmine isth DINOSAUR!!!
Aww So cute.. yah my boyfriend moved her from california then he moved back right before summer and we talked on IM for a while until one day he just stopped talking to me... so I hate love -.- but thats okay... anyways great story! :)

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The world wants me to change... but they are the ones that stay the same...
uaw i.i

is that a real history?

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:A reza com fé sem deus:
:gigante olha pedra, e ve pó:
:e quem não ouve a melodia, acha maluco quem dança:

Hey, feel free to check out my gallery :)
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A real history?
you mean story?

no it's not ^_^
it came from my "creative" mind,
lol :)
I said 'Don't'.

How'd you get so many people to read your story? I've only gotten one person to read mine.

TT.TT

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Rorrawr! Jasmine isth DINOSAUR!!!
Umm..i dunno i asked one person..
& the other person's watching me:/

I wouldn't call it "so many people" ^^;
Oh well, it's more people than I've got. Oh well, I'll just stay like that.

It's still three.

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Rorrawr! Jasmine isth DINOSAUR!!!

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